Zacharo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Treasure Island]

I think you should improve your detail in your animations and your jokes. For instance, i think you should at least make a walking cycle instead of sliding him across the beach like the floor was made of soap. As for the jokes, your heart is in the right place but all of the jokes in this flash has been done before, like a million times before. Just make sure you practice your art style more and practice making original ideas for jokes! Good luck!

UnholyXSoldier responds:

Thanks Il keep that in mind